You have seen and advertisement for a couple, who lives in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year Write a letter to the couple. In your letter Explain why you think you would be suitable for this job Say what else you could do for the family Give your reason for wanting the job
Dear Sir and Madam,
Dear Sir and Madam,
I am K.L Nimal Perera. I would like to inform you that, I am looking forward to
teach
your children. Change the verb form
teaching
Further
, I have followed a higher diploma in my native language. Linking Words
Additionally
, I have 6 months of teaching experience for children who are below 15 years old. Apart from that, I live Linking Words
in
very close to your residence.
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apply
Further
to explain Linking Words
you
, I have followed a child care course and I have more than one year Change preposition
to you
experience
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of experience
on
caring Change preposition
in
about
children. Change preposition
for
Therefore
, I may Linking Words
able
to teach some other necessary activities for your kids. Add a missing verb
be able
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Moreover
I would say, I am Add a comma
,Moreover
a
good at cooking and especially Change the article
apply
on
baby meal preparations.
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in
Finally
, I am searching for a job Linking Words
for
earn Change preposition
to
required
money to pay my university course fee. As I mentioned, I am able to come to work by bicycle and it Correct article usage
the required
help
to save money on transportation. If you are interested Change the verb form
helps
on
me, please let me inform over the phone. My phone number is 1122334455.
Thank you
Yours faithfully
K.L.NimalChange the preposition
in
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite