Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violent influence on TV and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that

people

are affected by

television

and

media

. Some

people

think that the

government

should control the

level

of

violent

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impact on

television

and at the cinema, while others believe that violent

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films

should not be regulated by the

government

.

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following paragraphs will be discussed before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand , nowadays, many

children

are influenced by

television

,

thus

it is not surprising if some parents think that the

government

should manage the

level

of violence in

films

and

media

.

Furthermore

, in today's

television

and online

media

can easily interact with

children

and

people

. The reason

for

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that some parents

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concern

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about their

children

will imitate violent

behaviors

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from

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in

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films

and

media

.

For instance

, there was

a

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news on

television

about the boy

bulglaries

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burglaries

people

, and after he

arrested

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, police asked him why he did that he said he imitated

from

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a film that he was watching

in

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television

.

Therefore

, to solve

this

problem, the

government

should

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a policy about the rate of

violent

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in film.

On the other hand

,

the

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television

and

media

show

are

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viewed by a majority of kids but are not all aggressive in nature. there are many kids with a

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positive

posivitive

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positive

attitude, they understand the impact of content, and they can think that should not imitate

that behaviors

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.

Consequently

, some

people

think that

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not important to control content in

a

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films

and

media

. To conclude, in my opinion, the

government

should not regulate the

level

of violent influence, for

people

can decide to watch whatever they want.

However

,

its

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should not regulate the

level

of violence, but the

government

should

also

has

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a limit age policy for

children

. these two opinions on

government

regulate the

level

of

violent

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. it is still

very

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personal question for

people

. Both of these have benefits and drawbacks that have to

considered

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by

people