Some people argue that parents of children who break the law should be punished in some way, because they are responsible for their children’s actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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the development of a new era,there is no denying the fact that people’s wisdom

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enhanced due to the evolution of society.But recently,our society still

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the people who educate their child in

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wrong way.As a matter of fact,wrong education

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a tremendous consequences

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tremendous consequences

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,and one of the most popular

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is the child’s bad actions and

parents

should

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theirs

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responsibility. Looking at the argument for the view that

parents

of the children who break the law should be punished

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somehow. It is admitted that some of them prove to be strong.In fact,one common justification is that the major factor which

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to those

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of

childen

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children

is the way of

parents

education .

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,when the kids grow up,

parents

have a great

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tho their child’s personality,and the

wrongupbringing

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wrong upbringing

makes their child think that breaking the law

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is not that serious to be punished.A

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good point worth considering here is that the

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parent’s personality.The bad personality

parents

can not

teaches

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their child to be a good person because children always notice and copy what their

parents

do and think that

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.

Besides

that,there still have one solid reason for the point of view that

parents

’

punishing

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should be punishable.It is easily can be seen that most

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the serial killers often have to deal with a bad

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childhood

children hood

childrenhood

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childhood

,

there

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parents

are often alcoholics,prostitutes,

cultist

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,

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and heretic

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heretic

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which affected seriously to children’s antisocial

behavior

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. In conclusion,children after all just an innocent people,and

parents

is the main factor which leads to their bad actions