Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that
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the high
school
curriculum unpaid community
service should be introduced. And I completely agree that working for others
from young ages
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members
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Firstly
, allocating some parts of high school
programmes for free community
services makes students
learn how to contribute to the development of their societies. Take planting more trees in neighbourhoods as an example, this
initiative makes the local area have more
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that, the more trees, the less CO2. Eventually, this
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people
live longer. Furthermore
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service
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others
helps students
build a unique skill to integrate fast into communities. Having interacted with different people
, students
soon know how to deal with people
with various personal
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, they eventually stop being shy of
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others
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natural process helps them become a real part of a whole society.
Secondly
, if unpaid community
service becomes necessary
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the high
school
syllabus, students
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for instance
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that
this
free service is his or her long-sought job which was undiscovered. Moreover
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school
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.
In conclusion, some people
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studying universities
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