Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Growing up in a society that owes to the dedicated work of the proceeding generations, young
people
tend to take all the facilities for granted or at least perceive that all conditions should be made possible for them by others.
Therefore
, in order to prevent
such
selfish-like
behavior
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in the youth, I believe, compulsory
community
service
should be an integral part of every
school
to render students more
patriot
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. The primary reason why students should be made to work for free is the possibility of developing certain good qualities in their
behavior
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, humbleness, commitment, considerateness,
generosity
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and generosity
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,
for example
.
However
, in order to nurture these qualities successfully in young
people
, educators themselves should
first
set
good
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example,
being
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dedicated to
such
duties and not regarding them as a burden or distraction from education. Motivated to do something for the good of the society alongside
with
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their teachers and peers, students do not only feel
the
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sense of fulfilment, but
also
they grow up as supportive and aspiring citizens of the country. Another reason why mandatory
community
service
should be a part of
school
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the school
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curriculum is that young
people
will be equipped with the qualities of independent
people
. No doubt that
this
is an essential quality for a businessman or an entrepreneur,
therefore
, needless to say,
such
independent-thinkers raised in the spirit of making
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contribution
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for the common good will make caring successful
people
, whom the nation can potentially rely on.
For example
, most ordinary entrepreneurs in China do not evade taxes thanks to their
school
education that obliges children to do
community
service
. In conclusion, considering the positive traits formed in children’s
behavior
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thanks to
community
service
,
such
practice, I believe, should certainly be a part of
high
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the high
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school
program so that society and
state
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benefit from it directly and indirectly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • unpaid community service
  • charity
  • neighborhood improvement
  • teaching sports
  • empathy
  • social justice
  • transferable skills
  • teamwork
  • leadership
  • problem-solving
  • civic duty
  • civic engagement
  • educational enhancement
  • practical experiences
  • academic learning
  • real-world applications
  • social cohesion
  • mutual support
  • time management
  • balancing priorities
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