Which of the following activities do you think will be the most beneficial to the environment? (1) Commute by biking or walking (2) Recycling (3) Eating a vegan diet

There are various human activities that have

a beneficial effects

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on the environment. Biking or walking, recycling and eating a vegan diet are few but they have their own significance in nature. As far as I am concerned, I would prefer to commute by walking or biking for having less

pollution

and for better health. I think

this

way for two reasons, which I will explore in

this

essay. As an initial point, I would like to say that nowadays

pollution

is the most concerning thing, which is increasing day by day with the use of vehicles in daily life, becoming a major cause of

pollution

. choosing to commute by walking will definitely create less

pollution

and if it is done by

majority

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of people

then

it will have a tremendous effect on the environment.

Moreover

,

pollution

is

also

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affecting

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effecting

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the climate and

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nature. So,

use

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of

less

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vehicles, will not only create less

pollution

but will

also

help in making nature more clean and fresh.

Secondly

, if we daily do cycling or

walking

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at least for one hour,

then

it will maintain our health

also

. Nowadays, many health issues are very common,

such

as obesity, high blood sugar, hypertension, high cholesterol and many more. Doctors

also

suggest to their patients

a regular walks

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daily to manage the concerning issue.

For example

, one of my

friend

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last

year diagnosed with high blood sugar, both for fasting and after meals. Along with medicines, the doctor advised him to walk or to do cycling

at

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least one hour daily. Within six months his blood sugar comes to normal and he is still following the same routine. In conclusion, I believe that using a cycle as a means of transport or by walking, will be advantageous to the environment,

further

this

will

also

keep us fit and healthy.