Most of the world’s problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree.

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day in the contemporary era,

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nature is experiencing

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a challenging moment that

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is affecting the sustainability and running of the day-to-day activities.Most

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consider overpopulation as the main cause of

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problems.From my point of view,I completely agree that there are too many

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on the planet to sustain and

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believe

also

that

overconsumption

pray a huge role in

the worlds problems

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First

and foremost,too many

family

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families

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on the planet are

such

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burden because it is difficult to sustain,some of the needs they require

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by the number in the

community

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In addition

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In addition

,when there is a huge number of folk ,it means most of the activities offered in the

community

are not quality since there is much to offer.

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research by the University of Nairobi depicts that 90% of cities are crowded.There is a total decline of spaces for accommodating

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.

Therefore

,the huge burden the globe is experiencing is stuffed so with good support and planning the matter can quickly be solved.

Secondly

,another fundamental issue which is in the top gear is

overconsumption

.Resource use has outpaced the sustainable capacity of the ecosystem,and the policy that stands to protect against overuse is no longer working.

However

, with

this

indication,the need of the

community

will not be achievable due to the imbalance.

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research done by Kenyatta University depicts that

overconsumption

matter is

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70%

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causing global troubles.

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lawmakers are becoming greedy

such

that they have no priority of matter to be attended to

first

.

Therefore

,overutilization of resources has caused an imbalance in a whole planet To sum up,there is a huge number to sustain in the whole sphere

such

that service delivery is affected in terms of quality.

However

,it is imperative to note that apart from the aforementioned drawback,

overconsumption

also

affects the world.