Most of the world’s problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree.

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nature is experiencing
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is affecting the sustainability and running of the day-to-day activities.Most
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consider overpopulation as the main cause of
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problems.From my point of view,I completely agree that there are too many
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on the planet to sustain and
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believe
also
that
overconsumption
pray a huge role in
the worlds problems
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the world's problems
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First
and foremost,too many
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on the planet are
such
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burden because it is difficult to sustain,some of the needs they require
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by the number in the
community
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,when there is a huge number of folk ,it means most of the activities offered in the
community
are not quality since there is much to offer.
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research by the University of Nairobi depicts that 90% of cities are crowded.There is a total decline of spaces for accommodating
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.
Therefore
,the huge burden the globe is experiencing is stuffed so with good support and planning the matter can quickly be solved.
Secondly
,another fundamental issue which is in the top gear is
overconsumption
.Resource use has outpaced the sustainable capacity of the ecosystem,and the policy that stands to protect against overuse is no longer working.
However
, with
this
indication,the need of the
community
will not be achievable due to the imbalance.
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research done by Kenyatta University depicts that
overconsumption
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70%
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causing global troubles.
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lawmakers are becoming greedy
such
that they have no priority of matter to be attended to
first
.
Therefore
,overutilization of resources has caused an imbalance in a whole planet To sum up,there is a huge number to sustain in the whole sphere
such
that service delivery is affected in terms of quality.
However
,it is imperative to note that apart from the aforementioned drawback,
overconsumption
also
affects the world.
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