You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter say what the problems are explain how a new fence will solve the problems suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost

Dear Mr Patel, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that your pet dog is giving me trouble with the fence between our properties. I think we will repair the railing so that problem can be solved. The problem I am having is that the railing quality is poor and not in good condition but your pup always trying to jump over the barbed wire.
Last
week, your pup jumped on it and broke it. Apart from
this
issue, we will fix the new rail
instead
of repairing the one old. I think it will solve the problem that your puppy makes.
First
, we will see different fences
such
as rigid steel with good quality so it will stay up to
last
long. I know, the price of it is a bit high but it will only solve the issue between us. I want to suggest you give me half price of the bar because your puppy gives that expenses but I think it will solve after putting new shade. I hope you agree with the letter, and
also
I am providing you bank cheque inside the envelope. your faithfully, vrushank
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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