Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some professionals think that it is more appropriate for
children
to begin
learning a new
language
at primary schools
instead
of secondary school.
This
essay will argue that the advantages of
this
outweigh the flawless.
Firstly
, it will demonstrate that the earlier someone learns an additional
language
the more likely they are to master it as well they can be seen about culture from the different aspects of situations and that brings confusion with their native tongue is not valid.
Children
start learning foreign languages early is that they will achieve fluency in adulthood.
This
is to say that they will have far more years to perfect their skill not only that it will seem perfectly native
speaker
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.
For example
, nowadays even in developing countries especially in Myanmar,
children
are forced to learn new languages to speak
it
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at an advanced level. Learning a
second
language
also
helps to be an eye-opener in different cultures.
In other words
, it benefits the overall socialization
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every environment.
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opposed to
this
say that it causes the child to become confused between their mother tongue and the other
language
.
However
, there are many
children
from bilingual families who do just as well in both languages. A good example might be,
I
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can speak in both Myanmar and Chinese as I am
hybrid
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. On the balance, the fact that early foreign
language
learning leads to higher fluency and improves socialization in various cultures clearly outweighs the drawback argument that it harms uptake of
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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