Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With the advancement of modern technology, the types and amounts of
advertisements
are keeping innovating and increasing separately and rapidly. At the moment, some Use synonyms
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with, we have to admit that Linking Words
advertisement
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products
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advertisement
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products
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repetitive and consistently, and dropped unpractically will make customers feel repugnant. And unfortunately, nowadays, most Linking Words
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For example
, when users log into Youtube, they often need to watch an advertising clip which lasts for 15 seconds before they can watch the video they want. And that advertising clip is often irrelevant to users' practical situations. The frequency of users watching an advertising clip Linking Words
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Therefore
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people
will choose to ignore them automatically, no matter whether it is related or not.
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advertisements
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advertisements
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people
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