Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, modern life has a great deal

effects

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on our bodies in terms of

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psychological

phsycological

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psychological

and

physyological

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physiological

. With the development of technological instruments

such

as

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smartphones

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smart phones

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smartphones

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and

internet

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the internet

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, the

accesibility

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accessibility

to many things is provided easily. At the

first

sight, even

these

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though these

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gains appear

in

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positive in some ways, especially,

this

situation brings about various detrimental consequences.

In addition

that

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advocate the view which

familes

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families

are affected by

this

quick life, it is going to be

detailed

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this

claim by some examples. It is a strict fact that technological benefits, which are acquired from the past to today, have presented important opportunities. One of the most noticeable

instance

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to be given at

this

point is the

time saving

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.

In other words

, to reach anything,

such

as information, finance and health services, evaluated to a rather comfortable point.

However

, in spite of all positive sides,

technologic

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technological

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addiction has commenced to

threat

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threaten

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each

individuals

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up to a particular degree.

Instead

of allocation

time

, most

of

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hours

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the hours

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are wasted on screens. As

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abnormal issue deteriorates the communication between people,

at

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the same

time

, different

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psychological

psycological

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psychological

disorders are to emerge. Unfortunately, the biggest victim is families. When it is analysed the consequences

which

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technologic

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technological

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addiction brought, it is declared the serious results. According to

the

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scientific study which is conducted by Toronto University in Canada, families suffer from

the

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lack of

time

quality. From

different

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perspective, another meaning of

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survey result is that family connections are erased thanks to the overmuch use of technology. Normally,

this

matter is another cause of stress. As long as the isolation increases among family members, stress levels will be higher. Eventually, from the examples and explanations given above,

negative

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effects of modern life on families are a significant problem and it is a necessity to find solutions in order to avoid

from

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this

problem.