You have just read an article in a nationa newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all all look similar to each other. You do not fully agree with this opinion. Writer letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter Say which points in the article you agreed with. Explain way in which your town centre is different from most other town centre. Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am K.L Nimal Perera and I would like to inform you that, regarding the newspaper article

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Sunday (20.06.2022). The article was about our

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and the writer has been described

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several things which

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is contained. According to that, our

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centre

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same

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as all other centres.

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, I should

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design

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, landscape and

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different from all other

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centres.

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, the

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built

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in 1950 and

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. Mr

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designer and all other

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centres have

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1975. Apart from that, the landscaping is

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under the ancient style in order to maintain the historical view of the

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building

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, I would like to offer a tour for the writer around the garden and inside the

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, he will be able to notice the changes

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our unique

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forward

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positive feedback. Thank you, Yours faithfully, K.L.Nimal Perera

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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172 words

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