You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as follows: Dear __________

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Dear Editor of Amazing Post, Hope
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letter to propose a couple of suggestions for the
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located at the heart of our campus.  I must say I really enjoy having dinner at the
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because of its tranquil atmosphere and service. It has become a symbol of our school given it is one of the old and most famous restaurants in our community. Its delicious food combined with impeccable service left me with a strong impression.
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, along with its growing popularity, there is a growing number of customers coming to the restaurants, undermining the dining experience. People are constrained to small spaces for activity and packed like sardines. The ventilation system, at the same time, does not work well, so people can hardly breathe fresh air. I would like to take
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can't accommodate so many visitors at the moment, it is necessary to expand its space. Preferably, the
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should fix the ventilation system and improve its air quality. These are just a number of suggestions from me as a faithful customer of
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. I am looking forward to the improvement of it. Kindly regards Clarence Peng
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