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Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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There is a perspective heating a debate over the fact that whether the pros of non-driver
transportations
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 are greater than its cons. In my opinion, there are still doubts about
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vehicle
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, so
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the benefits cannot overcome the shadow of its disadvantages.
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, vehicles that are completely dependent on the control of technology can cause unsafety in the event of an unexpected incident. Despite today's advanced technology, there are still many accidents in automatic devices due to technical or programming errors.
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, in 2021, a Tesla car had an accident in the US while in
self-driving
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 mode which caused the death of two people.
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, it led to a lot of controversy about whether the
vehicle
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 should be put into public service. Since there are still many problems during operation, the self-driving
vehicle
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 still makes people
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 about its ability.
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, widespread use of automated
transportations
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 may cause shortages of job opportunities in the future, especially in the driving industry. When all machines are automatic and do not need
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 control, companies may cut or switch employees which can lead to problems not only for the workforce
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 but
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 affect the entire economy of a country. Positions like taxi, truck and bus drivers or
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 may have to learn new skills to find work in other fields and a lot of workers will be unemployed.
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, the driverless
vehicle
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 can pose a threat to workers as well as organizations. In conclusion,
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 it can bring more convenience while using, non-driver vehicles still have many shortcomings that need to be overcome. Its wide application still needs
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 consideration and reasonable application in some areas so as not to lead to negative effects.
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