More and more families are choosing fast food over home cooked meal. What are the reasons and how they can be addressed?

Nowadays, more families choose fast
food
over home-cooked meals
although
they know that it is bad for their health. Still, grabbing fast
food
has its benefits worth considering.
For Example
, the
time
it took to order fast
food
is substantially less than making a meal themselves and they don't have to prepare any ingredients which could save them a ton of
time
. The
time
it took to prepare a meal is essential. From my experience, it took at least 2 hours a day or more to set up.
First
of all, you have to think of what you want to have. After you make a list of all the ingredients you need, you are now going to a shop nearby and
then
carefully select what you needed from your list.
This
would take some
time
if you lived far away from the store.
Next
, after you come back from the store, you have to bring out what you have bought and wash anything that can be washed
such
as vegetables in the clean water.
Then
you will have to prepare all the ingredients for want you are going to make.
This
could take a while if you prepare a complicated meal or a big feast. What comes
next
is cooking where many things can go wrong.
For instance
, you may add too much salt or use too much heat which could result in a disaster.
However
, there is the
last
thing you have to do whether you succeed or not. You have to clean up by washing dishes, pots and any cooking devices.
This
would
also
take
time
.
On the other hand
, if you choose to order fast
food
, you just have to take out a garbage bag at most or do nothing if you go eat outside.
This
would not only cost almost zero
time
of yours but
also
have less complicated tasks to do.
Therefore
,
that is
the reason why families prefer fast
food
over cooking one themselves.
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