More and more families are choosing fast food over home cooked meal. What are the reasons and how they can be addressed?

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Nowadays, more families choose fast

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over home-cooked meals

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they know that it is bad for their health. Still, grabbing fast

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has its benefits worth considering.

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, the

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it took to order fast

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is substantially less than making a meal themselves and they don't have to prepare any ingredients which could save them a ton of

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. The

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it took to prepare a meal is essential. From my experience, it took at least 2 hours a day or more to set up.

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of all, you have to think of what you want to have. After you make a list of all the ingredients you need, you are now going to a shop nearby and

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carefully select what you needed from your list.

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would take some

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if you lived far away from the store.

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, after you come back from the store, you have to bring out what you have bought and wash anything that can be washed

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as vegetables in the clean water.

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you will have to prepare all the ingredients for want you are going to make.

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could take a while if you prepare a complicated meal or a big feast. What comes

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is cooking where many things can go wrong.

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, you may add too much salt or use too much heat which could result in a disaster.

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, there is the

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thing you have to do whether you succeed or not. You have to clean up by washing dishes, pots and any cooking devices.

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take

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, if you choose to order fast

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, you just have to take out a garbage bag at most or do nothing if you go eat outside.

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would not only cost almost zero

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of yours but

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have less complicated tasks to do.

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that is

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the reason why families prefer fast

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over cooking one themselves.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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More and more families are choosing fast food over home cooked meal. What are the reasons and how they can be addressed?

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