You are watching television and saw a program being shown early in the morning that contained a lot of violence. You believe the program is unsuitable for that time of day. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter :- Give reason for writing. Explain what you think the problem is with the program. Say what you would like the station manager to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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letter is the intensity of violent content in the serial. Because
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crime incidents so it mostly contains beheaded dead bodies or sometimes horrible killing scenes. Though
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the fresh mood of people in the morning which ultimately decreases their productivity of the day.
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, I would like to suggest that if it is possible to change the time of the serial, please shift the serial anytime after 7 PM.
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, in order to decrease the violent material, you may take a meeting with the director and producer of the serial so they can blur or remove
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scenes. I hope you would consider the genuinity of my points and act
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. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown
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