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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.

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It's a smooth transformation phase towards the digital world, especially in the
last
 decade, we have seen some enormous changes. In upcoming years,
people
 will hardly buy newspapers, as any and everything is available on the internet, with just a click away. I don't agree with the statement completely as there are
people
 who still love to read news from the real newspapers rather than from mobile phones and tablets. Reading is a habit, developed
from
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 ancient times, so,
people
 don't want to change their way of reading and they do prefer reading the
newspaper
 itself.
Moreover
, it is healthy for our eyes, as it is far less stressful than the modern way of reading. Even
people
 with reading habits prefer hardcopy rather than digital ones. For ,instance students preparing for competitive exams buy a
newspaper
 every day, as it is easy to read and they can make their notes easily. Most importantly, mobile phones can be a distraction as they need to be focused on their goals. Digital media is on a boom during recent years, because of the numerous privilege it offers, so
people
 are migrating towards it.
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 it is economical and environmentally friendly, in ,addition user can read literally anything around the world at any time. Another benefit is that it can be read in
real time
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 rather than the traditional way, in which one has to wait for news to get published and can read the day after the real issue has occurred. To conclude, I would not doubt the perks that online news provides, but it will be harsh and early to say that, there will be no printed
newspaper
 in the future, though there can be a decrement in the audience. Both the ways have their own advantages and limitations which were discussed. In my opinion hardcopy of
newspaper
 will still be available in near future for sure. But prediction for the future will be a tough call right now
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