It is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medical research. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the past,
animals
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are the most important and one and only resources for
humans
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. We get food from them and make
clothes
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with their
fur
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and feather.
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, some
animals
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contain a certain amount of substance of medicine. But nowadays, there is no longer to use
animals
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for that,
humans
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find new ways.
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essay will discuss both sides. In the
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few years,
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have found new paths for
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humans
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consumption
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as
clothes
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and food.
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, people used to make
clothes
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from
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skins and
fur
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. But, these days they made coats
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fake
fur
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and feathers.
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increase
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an increase
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of
animals
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'
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population
.
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,
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the researcher
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researcher
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researchers
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created artificial meats and discovered that they can make medicine from some kind of chemical
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. Maybe these solutions will be beneficial for the world and nature.
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, using artificial medicine and meat
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bad for
humans
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' health. Because somehow we cannot get some
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necessary
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the necessary
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substance from that.
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The human's
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Human's
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body
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natural elements, but if we use artificial things for food and medical conditions it
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may be
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maybe
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dangerous for our bodies. Other than that,
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can be bad for the economy. For that reason, we spent a lot of money and time
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making fake leather and
fur
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.
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, we need so many workers for the process.
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can cause
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trouble.
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,
clothes
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made
by
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unnatural materials can be harmful
for
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the environment
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environment
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such
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as
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cause
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causing
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pollution and waste. In conclusion, I believe we should cut our usage of
animals
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'. They are living
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organisms
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too and killing and hurting them just for our own
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satisfaction
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satisfactions
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is wrong. So, I agree with the argument.
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, we can balance
animals
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' usage in the future.
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