It is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medical research. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past,
animals
are the most important and one and only resources for Use synonyms
humans
. We get food from them and make Use synonyms
clothes
with their Use synonyms
fur
and feather. Use synonyms
Moreover
, some Linking Words
animals
contain a certain amount of substance of medicine. But nowadays, there is no longer to use Use synonyms
animals
for that, Use synonyms
humans
find new ways. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss both sides.
In the Linking Words
last
few years, Linking Words
scientist
have found new paths for Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
Use synonyms
humans
consumption Change the noun form
human
such
as Linking Words
clothes
and food. Use synonyms
For example
, people used to make Linking Words
clothes
from Use synonyms
creature's
skins and Fix the agreement mistake
creatures'
fur
. But, these days they made coats Use synonyms
by
fake Change preposition
with
fur
and feathers. Use synonyms
This
is helpful for Linking Words
increase
of Add an article
an increase
the increase
animals
' Use synonyms
popullation
. Correct your spelling
population
Furthermore
, Linking Words
Add an article
the researcher
researcher
created artificial meats and discovered that they can make medicine from some kind of chemical Fix the agreement mistake
researchers
reactions
. Maybe these solutions will be beneficial for the world and nature.
Fix the agreement mistake
reaction
On the other hand
, using artificial medicine and meat Linking Words
are
bad for Change the verb form
is
humans
' health. Because somehow we cannot get some Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
necessary
substance from that. Add an article
the necessary
Correct article usage
The human's
Human's
body Change noun form
Human
need
natural elements, but if we use artificial things for food and medical conditions it Change the verb form
needs
Correct your spelling
may be
maybe
dangerous for our bodies. Other than that, Correct your spelling
may be
this
can be bad for the economy. For that reason, we spent a lot of money and time Linking Words
for
making fake leather and Change preposition
apply
fur
. Use synonyms
Besides
, we need so many workers for the process. Linking Words
This
can cause Linking Words
economy
trouble. Replace the word
economic
Also
, Linking Words
clothes
made Use synonyms
by
unnatural materials can be harmful Change preposition
with
for
Change the preposition
to
Add an article
the environment
an environment
environment
Change the noun form
environments
such
Linking Words
as
Add the preposition
toas
cause
pollution and waste.
In conclusion, I believe we should cut our usage of Wrong verb form
causing
animals
'. They are living Use synonyms
organism
too and killing and hurting them just for our own Fix the agreement mistake
organisms
Fix the agreement mistake
satisfaction
satisfactions
is wrong. So, I agree with the argument. Correct your spelling
satisfaction
However
, we can balance Linking Words
animals
' usage in the future.Use synonyms
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