It is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medical research. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past,

animals

are the most important and one and only resources for

humans

. We get food from them and make

clothes

with their

fur

and feather.

Moreover

, some

animals

contain a certain amount of substance of medicine. But nowadays, there is no longer to use

animals

for that,

humans

find new ways.

This

essay will discuss both sides. In the

last

few years,

scientist

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have found new paths for

humans

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consumption

such

as

clothes

and food.

For example

, people used to make

clothes

from

creature's

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skins and

fur

. But, these days they made coats

by

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fake

fur

and feathers.

This

is helpful for

increase

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an increase

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of

animals

'

popullation

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population

.

Furthermore

,

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the researcher

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researcher

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created artificial meats and discovered that they can make medicine from some kind of chemical

reactions

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. Maybe these solutions will be beneficial for the world and nature.

On the other hand

, using artificial medicine and meat

are

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bad for

humans

' health. Because somehow we cannot get some

of

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necessary

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substance from that.

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Human's

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body

need

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natural elements, but if we use artificial things for food and medical conditions it

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maybe

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dangerous for our bodies. Other than that,

this

can be bad for the economy. For that reason, we spent a lot of money and time

for

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making fake leather and

fur

.

Besides

, we need so many workers for the process.

This

can cause

economy

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trouble.

Also

,

clothes

made

by

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with

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unnatural materials can be harmful

for

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the environment

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environment

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such

as

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cause

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pollution and waste. In conclusion, I believe we should cut our usage of

animals

'. They are living

organism

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organisms

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too and killing and hurting them just for our own

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satisfaction

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satisfactions

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is wrong. So, I agree with the argument.

However

, we can balance

animals

' usage in the future.