Many people believe that social networking side like ( facebook ) have had a use negative impact on both individuals and society .to what extend do you agree?

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Social networking sites

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as Facebook have an adverse effect on a person and society.I completely agree with

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statement as it not only makes its users addicted but

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leads to an increase in controversies between them.

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explain these two issues in detail. First of all, the main drawback of these sites is that it creates an addiction to their usage over the people.

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, at any point in time, if a person gets a free hour, he or she

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that time on these pages, which can be utilised in many other better ways like spending moments with family and friends.

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, family time spent by everyone is analysed reducing current days

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that of an earlier age.

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is how these social spots are having a harmful effect globally.

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, these sites often result in creating controversy among people.

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pages open the gate for a large group, where a clash of different ideas often meets. These clashes often lead to disputes between them causing mutual harm and profile defaming etc.

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, Kangna Ranaut, an Indian actress, lost her reputation and fame

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creating controversies with other actors on

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is contributing to another main problem of their effect on the population. In conclusion, It is often accepted by everyone these days that social media is having a bad influence on the population because of its addiction on the one hand and contribution to disputes in

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society

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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