Introduction
Social networking sites
such
as Facebook have an adverse effect on a person and society.I completely agree with Linking Words
this
statement as it not only makes its users addicted but Linking Words
also
leads to an increase in controversies between them. Linking Words
This
essay shall Linking Words
further
explain these two issues in detail.Linking Words
Body paragraph 1
First of all, the main drawback of these sites is that it creates an addiction to their usage over the people.
In other words
, at any point in time, if a person gets a free hour, he or she Linking Words
spent
that time on these pages, which can be utilised in many other better ways like spending moments with family and friends.Wrong verb form
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For instance
, family time spent by everyone is analysed reducing current days Linking Words
than
that of an earlier age. Change preposition
to
This
is how these social spots are having a harmful effect globally.Linking Words
Body paragraph 2
Secondly
, these sites often result in creating controversy among people. Linking Words
As these
pages open the gate for a large group, where a clash of different ideas often meets. These clashes often lead to disputes between them causing mutual harm and profile defaming etc. Correct word choice
These
For example
, Kangna Ranaut, an Indian actress, lost her reputation and fame Linking Words
while
creating controversies with other actors on Linking Words
tweeter
.Correct your spelling
Twitter
This
is contributing to another main problem of their effect on the population.Linking Words
Conclusion
In conclusion, It is often accepted by everyone these days that social media is having a bad influence on the population because of its addiction on the one hand and contribution to disputes in
the
society Correct article usage
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on the other hand
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