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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #history #house #research
Houses
 are
the
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place
that
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people
 live which is meaningful for them. Some
of
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the
people
 take an interest on realize the story or history of the
houses
 where
people
 live in. In my opinion, there are some reasons for
people
 to figure out the history of their home with some methods. Most
of
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the human
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human
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 have a sense of belonging of where they are from or where they begin. Similar to
people
 learning the history of
hometown
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 or country,
people
 are curious about everything close to them.
Due to
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houses
are
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place
that
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people
start up
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 and come from,
so
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people
 are willing to spend time
on
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understanding the detail of their homes. To be more specific, it is common to see there were lots of impolite architects
are
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building the
house
 with shoddy work and use inferior materials. It actually affected a lot
to
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safety
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the safety
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 of living which is pretty important to notice
about
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. In order to have
satisfying
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a satisfying
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place
 to live, it is necessary for
people
 to understand
how
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 the building comes from. To obtain the information about the
house
 must ask someone who takes part in the manufacture of the
house
 without doubt. While the
house
 was
building
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built
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 by parents or
architect
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 are the
people
 who make lots of
decision
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decisions
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sand
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and
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 choices on the shape or elements of the
house
, no one is clear than they of
this
. If the
house
 where
people
 live
in
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is a symbolic building of the city, it is easier to figure out the process and story of the building from public
organization
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organizations
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 or websites on the internet.
Houses
 are meaningful for most
of
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people
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the people
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.
People
 are interested in the
place
 that they lived in are normal phenomenon, some basic methods help them to understand the details of the building.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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