You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good you want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer.

Dear Jassie, I hope
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letter finds you well, I am writing
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letter to express my heartfelt appreciation for your
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concert, which was held on 12 June 2025 in Dubai. Nextly, your voice and looks are incredible,
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, the way you connected with the audience and sang the songs on their demand shows how respectful you are towards others' feelings.
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, one of the songs you performed Insomnia, deeply touched my heart, and I remember during
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song how people were shouting and enjoying.
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,
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is one of the best events that I have ever attended.
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available on YouTube, which gives me satisfaction, and even after watching it more than 20 times, it is still new to me. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. I feel so lucky to be a part of
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great performance. With love, Manpreet

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coherence and cohesion
Try to use separate paragraphs for different ideas to improve clarity.
task achievement
Consider adding more personal feelings or experiences related to the concert.
task achievement
The letter has a warm and respectful tone, which is great for addressing an artist.
coherence and cohesion
You successfully conveyed your emotions about the concert, making it engaging to read.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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