Some people say that the bicycles are a good, modern means of transportation. Other say riding a bicycle has clear disadvantages. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.
It is true that some more than 80% of the world's population is
people
believe that using bicycles are
good and is a more suitable mean of transport. Change the verb form
is
However
the Add a comma
,However
Correct your spelling
opponents
oponents
argue that riding a bicycle has disadvantages and it is not for Correct your spelling
opponents
Correct your spelling
everyone
eveyone
. In my point of view, Correct your spelling
everyone
i
completely agree with both arguments and the following essay will state the reasons behind Change the capitalization
I
it
.
Correct pronoun usage
them
Firstly
, in the modern world, people
are less active. They have a very busy Correct your spelling
schedule
shedule
and it is difficult for them to find Correct your spelling
schedule
a
free time to exercise. According to World Health Organization (WHO)Correct article usage
apply
Add a comma
,
obesied
and suffering from diabetes or other heart Correct your spelling
obese
obsessed
Correct your spelling
related
relateed
issues and the number is growing. The main reason for Correct your spelling
related
this
is lack of exercise. Thus
activities such
as cycling is
important. If Change the verb form
are
people
cycle
more they do not have to devote time to exercise and they will be active and healthy. Correct your spelling
Additionally
Additonally
, using a Correct your spelling
Additionally
bicyle
will help to reduce the carbon footprint and will lower Correct your spelling
bicycle
the
global warming. Cyclists can Correct article usage
apply
also
minimise the traffic and commute to and from work with less time.
On the other hand
, cycling to work will not be always practical and effective. For example
, it is difficult for someone to cycle
about ten kilometers
to work and even if they do, they will be Change the spelling
kilometres
Correct your spelling
exhausted
exhaused
and be less productive.Correct your spelling
exhausted
Additionally
, it is also
impractical to cycle
everywhere. People
cannot cycle
to a function such
as wedding, insted
they have to use any other vehicle. It is Correct your spelling
instead
also
known that about thirsty
two Correct your spelling
thirty
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
the
road accidents are caused by cyclists and Correct article usage
apply
therefore
it is important to impose laws to protect cyclists and also
build facilities to safeguard them.
In conclusion, it is clear that using of
bicycles has both advantages and disadvantages and I believe that Change preposition
apply
Correct your spelling
even though
eventhough
Correct your spelling
even though
people
cannot cycle
to
everywhere, they should Change preposition
apply
cycle
whenever they can as it will be Correct your spelling
beneficial
benefitial
for both health and the Correct your spelling
beneficial
Correct your spelling
environment
enviroment
.Correct your spelling
environment
Submitted by Chathusizzie on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.