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Some people think that the best wat to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative wats or reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Capital punishment is one of the main ways
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penalty given to crimes . Many people state that it is the perfect way to diminish the
crime
 rate while others suggest there are so many other ways too to decrease the
crime
 rate.
This
 essay discusses both ends. In my opinion, should go for other better ways to reduce illegal activities because there occurs a violation of human
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rights as
rights
 well as no
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ethical value other than witness is valued there. People will always have fear
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 their death. While using it to threaten them on the prevention of criminal activities will give a good result. Everyone gets to remember these things whenever they try to commit a
crime
.
For instance
, a research study by AA university showed
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% of POXO cases were reduced only because
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their penalty was raised to death.
On the other hand
, it's very clear that there occurs a violation of human rights. No one has the right to kill someone for any reason. ,no
such
 religious thoughts or morality are supporting
this
.
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 clearly written as god can only give life and take life.
Furthermore
, the
crime
 he committed may have any reason which meets morality. But the witnesses may
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towards
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such
 punishment. It is
also
 not to be justified. To sum up,
although
 there are several factors that come up with
this
 topic, I believe that can search for some other way of punishment to be done to prevent
such
 breach of rights and to protect morality.
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