You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visits you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to put forward my concern about the
chlorine
content issue in
pool
water
which I faced during my
last
visit. At the onset, I vividly remember all the members who visit the
pool
on a daily basis including me have been facing the extra
chlorine
in the
water
since
last
Monday and it causes numerous skin problems to us
such
as eyes and skin redness. After the
water
purification process, your staff added
chlorine
to make the
water
free from germs. Though your staff has changed the
pool
water
three times, the problem is still there.
Hence
, being a scientist in the
water
industry, I would like to suggest the method that I use to resist the issue. Primarily, there is a need to increase the
pool
water
temperature up to 75 degrees celsius so that it will break the
chlorine
molecules with the help of a submersible heat generator. When
this
process is done, just refill the
pool
and the problem will be solved. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Jacob Brown
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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