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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?

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There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the fact that the majority of contemporary cultures are built on
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 and regulations. Some individuals think that if
people
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 were allowed to do anything they wanted, society would not be able to operate. In my opinion,
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this
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 statement is valid to some extent, the legislations still do more good than harm. Obviously, the number of
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 and
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 make
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 are subjected to in most modern-day societies causes harmful problems. Nowadays, the majority of
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 and regulations only benefit a small portion of society, while the legislation and
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 that are meant to protect the majority continue to have an impact on them.
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, owning a gun is prohibited in several nations, but they are unable to adequately defend themselves when a thief enters their house and tries to kill them with a lethal weapon.
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, sets of
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 have a negative impact on dwellers. While the disadvantages of disciplines are widely acknowledged, it is unfair if its counterpart is ignored.
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 and
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 exist to establish limits and encourage
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 that promotes a calm and functional community.
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, if there were no
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 or norms, and
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 no police to enforce those
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,
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 some upheaval may occur
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 of individuals trying to take advantage of the situation.
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,
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, would only be a short-term situation since, in my opinion, most
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 are kind and would eventually band together to fight those who were causing the rest of social harm, restoring peace to the world once more.
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, disciplines and norms bring tremendously beneficial to the citizens and society. In conclusion,
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 there are some reasons to make several
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 think the drawbacks of norms and
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 are harmful to humanity, the merits still overshadow
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