Should the government pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university?

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as free
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education
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are controversial issues. Some say that it is one of the duties of all governments to spend
money
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for
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it because it is a priority for the
society
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and some say that free
education
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should only be provided for beginning to
highschool
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students and the
money
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for
university
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education
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should be devoted to other critical issues
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as healthcare system. In
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I am going to discuss both
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opinions and give my own.
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one
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hand some people believe that free
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education
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for all who are willing
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brings equality and helps
the
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society
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to
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develop
develope
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develop
. They believe that the profit of
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investment
overweigh
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its costs for
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and it should be done.
On the other hand
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, some say that free
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is only necessary
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limited grades. As
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faces many problems
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as health and environmental issues and
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is limited, Every dollar
that is
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spent on free
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education
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means that other priorities are ignored and would run out of
money
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so
this
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investments
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drawbacks, overweigh
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advantages. I agree that deciding about free
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is not an easy task and it needs
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opinion
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. but
personally
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I believe that no one should be limited
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university
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education
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due to lack of
money
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. If governments are not able to provide free
university
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education
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, they should consider aids like loans that could be afforded by students and they can
be pay
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it back in a
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period after graduation.

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