Should the government pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university?

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as free

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education

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are controversial issues. Some say that it is one of the duties of all governments to spend

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for

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it because it is a priority for the

society

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and some say that free

education

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should only be provided for beginning to

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students and the

money

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for

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education

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should be devoted to other critical issues

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as healthcare system. In

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opinions and give my own.

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one

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hand some people believe that free

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education

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for all who are willing

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brings equality and helps

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society

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develop

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. They believe that the profit of

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investment

overweigh

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its costs for

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and it should be done.

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, some say that free

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is only necessary

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limited grades. As

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faces many problems

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as health and environmental issues and

budget

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is limited, Every dollar

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spent on free

university

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education

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means that other priorities are ignored and would run out of

money

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this

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drawbacks, overweigh

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advantages. I agree that deciding about free

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is not an easy task and it needs

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opinion

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. but

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I believe that no one should be limited

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university

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education

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due to lack of

money

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. If governments are not able to provide free

university

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education

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, they should consider aids like loans that could be afforded by students and they can

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it back in a

long term

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period after graduation.

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Fully explain your ideas

You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Ask your friend to send you a particular photograph • Explain why you need that particular photograph • Tell your friend what happened to your copy of it

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