Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measures should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?

A growing number of

children

are overweighted these days. It is a concerning

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because it has an adverse effect on their health conditions.

This

essay will consider the main causes of obesity problems among

children

,before proposing two possible solutions.

To begin

with, the most important cause of obesity problems is an unhealthy diet. With the various choices of junk

food

, many

children

choose not to eat healthy meals, as they may taste comparatively

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.

As a result

, the

children

become

obesed

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obese

obsessed

more easily since junk

food

is high in salt, sugar and fat with high calories. Another key factor is a sedentary lifestyle with limited physical

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. Nowadays, most

children

are facing

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amount of extra-curricular homework and

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addiction to video games.

This

could cause less time to do sports and

sitting

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for a longer time,

for instance

, a boy could

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ipad

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iPad

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games

in

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a sedentary for hours without parental intervention.

However

, there are two solutions to

this

problem.

First

of all, parents should prepare more delicious and interesting

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home cooked

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meals.

This

would entice them to eat more

food

which is more nutritional and

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less addicted to junk

food

.

For example

,a dish made in a teddy bear shape could stimulate the appetite of the

children

.

Secondly

, the school should cut down the amount

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and encourage students to participate in sports more often, which would help them burn calories and stay healthy. In conclusion,

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obesity is a serious problem which is primarily

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caused

casued

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caused

by an unhealthy diet along with limited

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exercises

excercises

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exercise

. I reckon that both parents and

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shools

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schools

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should make efforts to address

this

issue by the

provison

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provision

of

well presented

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meals with

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plenty of nutrition, and reducing the amount of homework while encouraging the

children

to play sports more often.