The best way to solve traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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has been the topical subject of the debate. In

this

regard, the opinion of the public is divided over whether living in

cities

rather than suburbs are ideal

solution

or not.

Although

dwelling in

cities

can solve the

traffic

, I reckon that other solutions are more effective for solving

this

issue, so I disagree with

this

opinion.

To begin

with, there is an appealing ground why people insist that living in

cities

is the best

solution

for

traffic

. Clearly, central

cities

have

well-developed

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infrastructure

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showed

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car accidents than suburbs. According to a recent survey, drivers moved by car more safely in the major city in Korea because of better road conditions and signal systems.

Hence

,

this

offers strong proof that driving in

cities

can be a safe

solution

to

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transportation

problems. Despite the abovementioned views, I certainly believe that there are other methods to solve

traffic

such

as developing more

transportation

facilities and services.

First

of all, additional mass

transportation

can allow citizens to have a more efficient driving experience.

For example

, one shows that the development of subway and bus systems allows users to travel safe and save commute time by distributing the vehicles.

Second

, car-sharing and taxi apps are

also

solutions to the

transportation

problem.

Therefore

, people can hit the two birds with one stone by solving the

traffic

issues and increasing economic growth using state-of-the-art technology. To sum up,

although

staying in

cities

is one of the solutions for

traffic

, I definitely contend that developing additional

transportation

facilities and services

are

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a better way to solve the

transportation

problem.