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It is argued that parents of children who break the law should be punished as they are responsible for their children's actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#parents #children #law #actions
The argument that parents of
children
 who break the law should be punished is a valid one because
,
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 most
children
 who
carries
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 out these crimes are influenced to a large extent by their parents. Failure of parental tutelage and authority can be showcased to society as outright disdain for law and order. I,
however
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 do not subscribe to
such
 opinions. Most
children
 engaged in
heinuos
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heinous
 activities come from loving homes where discipline is
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emphasised
emphasized
emphasissed
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emphasised
. A
child
's trajectory in life is dictated by the choices the
child's
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make
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 much as bringing the horse to water does not guarantee its hydration as the decision to drink or not drink is left solely to the horse.
Children
 should be guided
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 the straight path but if they derail, they should be made to face the music squarely. Not only will
this
 form a firm basis for future interaction as the law of action and consequences becomes ingrained in their minds
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it would
also
 deter other
children
 from falling out of line and indulging in crime. If parents are made to suffer for their
children
's
misdemeanor
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, it would continue unabated and breed a hostile environment in the home. Hatred for a
child
 is not only inimical to the
child
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 upbringing and restoration to good living, it would
further
 damage a fragile situation.
Children
 should be made to live through the consequences of their actions. It would stem the tide
if
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 continued
child
 criminality

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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