Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Though a section of society believes that there could be many adverse impacts on the
business
sectors
like transportation due to
climate
change mitigation, other sections of
society
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deny
this
notion on the basis of considering it a chance to introduce new industries
such
as solar power vehicles.
This
essay will delve deeper into these viewpoints along with my opinion in the conclusion.
To begin
with, after the implementation of various
reforms
regarding
climate
change, a lot of restrictions have been imposed on many
business
sectors
. To cite an example, a survey conducted by The Guardian Newspaper in March 2015 revealed that 65% of car and air conditioner manufacturers had been facing a loss of $10 million every year in the USA since the government issued strict policies regarding the ban on the use of harmful gases and materials.
Hence
, these industries have to purchase costly
environment friendly
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raw materials.
In addition
, not only do
such
firms require updated technology according to
reforms
,
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but there are
also
various kinds of taxes to be paid and all these factors affect the
business
sector negatively.
On the contrary
, since many nations have issued many reforming policies related to climatic changes,
this
approach has given multifarious opportunities to many
business
fields. Primarily, the
sectors
related to solar power have tremendously emerged as big firms.
For example
, solar panels for the use of boiling water and to support heating systems in houses in many countries have observed a significant increase in their sales.
Moreover
, solar power car engines are being constructed by new transportation companies like Tesla and
certainly
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it is a good time to adopt a futuristic approach by many firms to hinder the
climate
changes
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. To conclude, it is unequivocal that
although
a segment of society
opine
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that
climate
change
reforms
are an obstacle
for
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the working of many businesses, I believe these
reforms
can provide a pavement to the
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solar powered
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business
sectors
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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