you recently hired a contractor for paining work. The work is over but there are some complaints regarding the work. Mention in your letter : write what work was inappropriate Describe the complaints say what the contractor should do

Dear Mr Jones, I am writing

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letter to show my dissatisfaction towards your work recently done at my new home. you knew already that I have recently bought a new house from one of the realtors in which the basement requires painting in each of the two bedrooms. I have clearly mentioned to you that dark green colour paint is to be painted in the master bedroom whereas light green is to be done in the small bedroom.

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, you have painted the dark one in the child's bedroom which is not suitable for my kids.

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will strain their eyes especially when they are studying. I understand

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is because your assistants have not been understood clearly based on your communication with them.

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, I would suggest you come to my house to correct it by taking appropriate action in

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matter to paint the colours as requested earlier. Looking forward you to taking action immediately in

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matter. Your's Sincerely, Jithendra

june.jitendra82Sun Jun 26 2022

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

164 words

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