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politicians are more responsible for protecting of the environment than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#politicians #environment #individuals
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Opinions differ about
politicians
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' degree of responsibility toward the environment or the
individuals
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, some
people
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 believe that the environmental problems should be tackled, and taking the
priority
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 over the individual's needs. Climate change and global warming are impacting human lives and health in a variety of ways,
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, it is overlapping with
individuals
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' health and safety. I believe that taking the environment as a
priority
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,
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 would have a positive reflection on the
individuals
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. It is true that
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politicians
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 should be held to account for different needs that their citizens require. Health services and education are among different needs that
people
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 are concerned about,as well as,
people
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 feeling frustrated and dissatisfied with human rights and democracy.
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, different countries around the world have witnessed demonstrations against government legislation, either those related to increases in the cost of living and low levels of services or that related to human rights and democracy.
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, the environmental crisis that the
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 have been facing currently is an urgent
priority
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 for all governments and
individuals
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.Global heating and climate change are major issues that should be put on top of
politicians
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' responsibilities. Tackling
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, by endorsing legislation that reduces carbon footprint and gas emissions, will have a great positive effect on human lives. Currently, many countries have taken great steps in
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 way,
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, The UK has endorsed many laws in the
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 20 years that are related to CO2 emissions, encouraging
people
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 to move to electric cars and decreasing the public transportation prices.
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, there are many other measures that can be taken to make our air healthier, which
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 will reflect on
individuals
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' well-being. In conclusion,
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,
people
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's needs should be considered as a crucial file in
politicians
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' deck, the environmental problems are highly critical urgent issues that should take the
priority
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 over other individual demands.
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