Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Government motivates the

citizens

to maintain their

health

. One of the ways is constructing the sports

facilities

,

however

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a number of

citizens

voiced out that

this

kind of solution is not effectful,

instead

, the government should provide other methods.

This

essay will discuss both pros and cons of

this

matter.

To begin

with,

better

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the better

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quality of

equipment

are

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utilised

to

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the residents. They are able to exercise with various

facilities

at any

time

and anywhere.

For example

,

people

have to sign up for gyms in order to use professional

facilities

,

however

, some of them are burdened with the expensive cost or chase after the closing

time

of the gym.

Moreover

, public

sport

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facilities

helped the

citizens

to be more socialised. Most of the

equipment

is constructed around the residential areas, where the residents usually mingle around. Residents are more sociable by exercising with the neighbourhoods early

,

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or

exercise

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together. Sports

facilities

open a community to meet the

people

and

this

might bring positive

effect

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for

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public

health

, or even mental

health

by meeting the

people

physically.

Thus

, building public

equipment

benefits

the

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people

to move their

body

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regularly at any

time

with their friends.

On the other hand

, it is undeniable that

this

solution might not improve public

health

.

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has to motivate the

people

to look after their

health

regularly. A handful of

people

find exercising is

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time wasting

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and assume that their conditions are perfect since there is no illness.

For example

,

people

are recommended to do regular

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check ups

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at least once a month even though they are not sick,

however

, only a few

people

are attending for it.

Also

, working adults do not have

time

to look after their

health

. They are exhausted after long working hours or even overnight working which makes insufficient

time

with

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exercising.

Although

they have a break a handful of the adults want to take a break at home

instead

of exercising.

Therefore

, sports

facilities

might not be favoured by

people

due to lack of

time

and not being aware of the importance of

health

. In conclusion, providing

the

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quality

equipment

gives opportunity to the

citizens

,

however

, they have to know why they should take care of their

health

and should provide

with

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sufficient

time

to exercise or even attend regular

health

checkups.