Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Government motivates the

citizens

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to maintain their

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. One of the ways is constructing the sports

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a number of

citizens

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voiced out that

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kind of solution is not effectful,

instead

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, the government should provide other methods.

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essay will discuss both pros and cons of

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matter.

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with,

better

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the better

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quality of

equipment

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are

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utilised

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the residents. They are able to exercise with various

facilities

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at any

time

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and anywhere.

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,

people

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have to sign up for gyms in order to use professional

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, some of them are burdened with the expensive cost or chase after the closing

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of the gym.

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, public

sport

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facilities

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helped the

citizens

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to be more socialised. Most of the

equipment

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is constructed around the residential areas, where the residents usually mingle around. Residents are more sociable by exercising with the neighbourhoods early

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or

exercise

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together. Sports

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open a community to meet the

people

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and

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might bring positive

effect

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for

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public

health

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, or even mental

health

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by meeting the

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physically.

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, building public

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benefits

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people

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to move their

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regularly at any

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with their friends.

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, it is undeniable that

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solution might not improve public

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.

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has to motivate the

people

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to look after their

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regularly. A handful of

people

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find exercising is

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time-wasting

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time wasting

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and assume that their conditions are perfect since there is no illness.

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people

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are recommended to do regular

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check-ups

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check ups

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at least once a month even though they are not sick,

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, only a few

people

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are attending for it.

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, working adults do not have

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to look after their

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. They are exhausted after long working hours or even overnight working which makes insufficient

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with

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exercising.

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they have a break a handful of the adults want to take a break at home

instead

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of exercising.

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, sports

facilities

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might not be favoured by

people

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due to lack of

time

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and not being aware of the importance of

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. In conclusion, providing

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quality

equipment

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gives opportunity to the

citizens

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,

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, they have to know why they should take care of their

health

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and should provide

with

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sufficient

time

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to exercise or even attend regular

health

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checkups.