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Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give your explanation using some relevant examples from your experience.

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Mostly,
money
 is a very essential need for human beings, but there is no assurance of joy. Because
people
 are suffering from many other issues where
money
 is not connected.
However
,
people
 are required funds to have these basic needs
such
 as their own house and food. In my opinion,
money
 is very important to live a
life
, because an empty hand can never bring excitement to a house.
For instance
, a decades ago if a
person
 does not have enough
money
 even, he could survive. But currently cannot be possible.
Moreover
, if a
person
 has enough
money
 with well status,
then
 he could avail many prospects.
Such
 as
,
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 can live in a good society. children could get studies in well-reputed schools. For sure the family will be happy which they have. On another side, some
people
 being rich are unhappy in their
life
 because as I mentioned human beings are affected by many unsolved problems. Due to unspecific working hours, could not manage time to spend with their families, always has working pressure on the wealthy
person
, even away with social
life
. but most of the richest
people
 are living a lavish
life
, they are well in managing all their problems with
money
.
Lastly
, wealth is necessary for having standard
life
 as well as happiness. A
person
 can stay where ever he wants and
life
 will be easy without struggling. A lifetime of an individual will extend.
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