In spite of the advances made in agriculture, mamy people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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and amelioration in technology were made in the previous decades in the area of agriculture,

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as the development of all kinds of farming machinery, and seeds which are more productive and pest-resistant.

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, a considerable amount of people on Earth still habitually suffer from hunger. In

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and foremost, we can see that the hunger problem mainly happens in the developing

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whilst the adoption of the agricultural technologies aforementioned mainly occurs in the developed

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question, the machinery and seeds reduce the average cost of food and so why are they not adopted by

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? The reason is that there are other prohibitive costs encountered by the hungry

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-world people. Admittedly, there are extreme occasions like locusts, the bigger factor is that the poorer

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usually lack the resources or a stable political environment to commit

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the construction of infrastructure. Indeed, agriculture needs tons of infrastructure like

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dams,

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pipes, and goods roads to bring the seeds and fertilizers to the farmland and the harvested crops to the processing factories.

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, multiple storage facilities are

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needed to accommodate additional crops during good harvests. In the absence of

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facilities, farmers are in a high-risk and high-cost situation and very likely the production level is not high enough to feed people's mouths. In light of these, in order to alleviate the problems, developing

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should consider different ways to finance their infrastructure like dams and

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pipes, which is understandably easier said than done. Still, more in-depth ideas,

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tax systems reforms to reduce tax evasions and seeking help from international organizations like the IMF, can be explored. In conclusion, there are deeper-level reasons like scarcity of

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and lack of roads that lie beneath the starvation problem.

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these problems

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literally insurmountable, at least to those developing

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, I still believe that, with some luck, the problems can be mitigated to a certain extent if we are heading

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correct direction.