You have recently been offered a job in Canada living with a family for 6 months and looking after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him/her why do you want this job, explain how you will spend your free time in Canada, and invite your friend to visit you when you are in Canada

Dear Jessica, I am thrilled to share the exciting news that I have been offered the opportunity to work as a nanny in Canada for the next six months.
This
opportunity aligns perfectly with my long-standing desire to gain international experience
while
indulging in my passion for caring for children. My decision to pursue
this
job stems from my genuine affection for children, and my extensive experience in childcare, particularly with infants over the past two years.
Thus
, I understand the importance of adhering to established rules
while
maintaining a nurturing and gentle approach. Rest assured, I am committed to creating a positive and enriching environment for the six-year-old child under my care. In my leisure time, I have meticulously planned a variety of activities to immerse myself in Canadian culture.
For instance
, I am eager to explore the country's natural landscapes, visit museums, and attend local events.
In addition
, since it would be winter season, I’m thrilled to try skiing for the first time and experience my first snow here.
Above all
, considering the plethora of exciting activities and experiences Canada has to offer, I can't help but extend an invitation for you to visit. Imagine the joy of exploring Canadian cuisine and partaking in various sports together. If permitted by my employer, I would love for you to spend a day or two with the family, making
this
adventure even more memorable. I am genuinely looking forward to the possibility of sharing
this
incredible journey with you. Please let me know which dates suit you best for a visit. Yours faithfully
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • au pair
  • nanny
  • childcare
  • cultural exchange
  • language acquisition
  • leisure activities
  • community involvement
  • landscape
  • recreation
  • cuisine
  • explore
  • hospitality
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