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Some suggest than young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the itadvantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

#suggest #people #job #years #school #university #itadvantages
Too many
people
 think it important to learn some skills by working after graduation from high school to improve the
expirence
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experience
 of communication skills and other skill. Some think it's giving the teenager a full view
about
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 the jobs the market needs. The benefits of taking a rest after high school are to prepare themselves
to
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university
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 by planning
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life
 step-by-step. Generally, some
teenager
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 prefer to try working to feel how the employee can
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 on
himself
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 and get control
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his
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life
 and money which
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 them a clear idea about how the
life
 is different
of
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 the high school. A lot of
youngester
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youngster
youngsters
 don'
t
 have a goal. So,
there
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 parents agree with
leave
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 a gap years to learn
indepenting
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depending
independent
 on
there
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their
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 own. The drawbacks it's not that
much
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bad but it's ruined some
people
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life
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. They think it's wasting time and they
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believe
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belive
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believe
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 as fast you finish your education as much you can enjoy
the
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life
.
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Other thing
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, if your financial situation is not good you have to involve in some jobs
as
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 a
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part-time
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part time
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jobs
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job
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 or a
full time
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in
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job
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the job
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 they don'
t
 like. In rare cases, some youth who don'
t
 leave a gap years graduated in old age older than the younger
people
 by five or seven years.
Finally
,
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 depend on the
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 situation and
there
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 financial and social statement. So, we can'
t
 prove which one is on the right side but think which is better for planning the
life
 in a perfect way.
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