Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some critics state that the crucial environmental issue in recent years is special
species
of planet and animals going to disappear,
while
others believe that there are major problems that should be addressed. In my ,opinion global warming and air pollution are more urgent. On the one hand, in some groups of people including ,me there are many critical environmental problems that have an effect on our lives. I think global warming is a pressing environmental issue that we are facing nowadays. The main reason behind
this
problem is the ever-growing amount of carbon dioxide
that is
emitted into the air every day. Different human-related factors,
such
as factories and automobiles, contribute to
this
problem by burning fossil fuels.
As a consequence
, the world is getting warmer at an alarming rate and
therefore
, affecting every country. We must act immediately if we do not want to cause insoluble environmental problems.
On the other hand
, some people believe that many
species
of animals and plants are on the verge of extinction. Government should allocate enough budget to build wildlife reserves
,
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and enforce new laws to prosecute poachers. I truly believe that with regard
global
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weather temperature can protect many
species
. Climate changes cause Intense, searing heat, and come across with ice melting
as a result
, the levels of the oceans are rising steadily every year and destroying animals' territories
thus
, many
species
are disappearing. Changing the weather pattern is surely a significant factor that exacerbates the endangered
species
situation. In conclusion,
while
it is apparent that the loss of particular kinds of flora and fauna is one of the main ecological issues, it is undeniable that climate change is
above all
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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