Some critics state that the crucial environmental issue in recent years is special 
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 of planet and animals going to disappear, Use synonyms
while
 others believe that there are major problems that should be addressed. In my ,opinion global warming and air pollution are more urgent.
On the one hand, in some groups of people including ,me there are many critical environmental problems that have an effect on our lives. I think global warming is a pressing environmental issue that we are facing nowadays. The main reason behind Linking Words
this
 problem is the ever-growing amount of carbon dioxide Linking Words
that is
 emitted into the air every day. Different human-related factors, Linking Words
such
 as factories and automobiles, contribute to Linking Words
this
 problem by burning fossil fuels. Linking Words
As a consequence
, the world is getting warmer at an alarming rate and Linking Words
therefore
, affecting every country. We must act immediately if we do not want to cause  insoluble environmental problems.
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On the other hand
, some people believe that many Linking Words
species
 of animals and plants are on the verge of extinction. Government should allocate enough budget to build wildlife reservesUse synonyms
,
 and  enforce new laws to prosecute poachers. I truly believe that with regard Remove the comma
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global
 weather temperature can protect many Change preposition
to global
species
. Climate changes cause Intense, searing heat, and come across with ice melting Use synonyms
as a result
, the  levels of the oceans are rising steadily every year and destroying animals' territories Linking Words
thus
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species
 are disappearing. Changing  the weather pattern is surely a significant factor that exacerbates the endangered Use synonyms
species
 situation. 
In conclusion, Use synonyms
while
 it is apparent that the loss of particular kinds of flora and fauna is one of the main ecological issues, it is undeniable that climate change is Linking Words
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