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Many countries are worried about the damage to the economy that coronavirus is causing. Give some examples of how coronavirus is damaging the economy and suggest possible solutions.

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Several
countries
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 are concerned about the damage to the
economy
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 that the coronavirus is causing.
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 the coronavirus avoids commercial between
countries
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.
Countries
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 cannot sell raw materials to other
countries
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.
People
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 can't open their shops or businesses,
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 the
economy
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 has been suffering.
People
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 are worried about infection. They always change and spread from country to country. They
don'twant
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don want
 to take the risk, want to take the risk,
they
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but they
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 prefer to stay home. Shopping malls cant sell any stuff because there is so much isolation they
cant
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can't
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 even go to work. Lots of companies are
sanked
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ranked
spanked
,
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 the
economy
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 is impacted badly.
Such
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 as in Turkey, where lots of companies are
sanked
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ranked
spanked
tanked
 and the government has been dealing with the
corona virus
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coronavirus
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. Turkey's
economy
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 has been collapsing since it started
inflaction
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inflation
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 has been climbing, all prices have been increasing, and being so expensive,
people
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 can't even afford to Inflation has been rasing the whole world buy new clothes or smartphones. Life is getting difficult.
People
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 are struggling with starving
people
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 whose purchasing power has been decreased because the
economy
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 has been destroyed by
coronavirus
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a coronavirus
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. there are lots of solutions,
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 as finding a new vaccine and selling it all over the world. It preserves any damage or spread possibility. The vaccine will deactivate the
corona virus
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coronavirus
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 when it is taken to the patient
people
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. They will recover from illness.
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