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In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

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There are many conversations about parenting. Many books were written about that and no united opinion here. Nurturing a child plays a significant role in their life. In some countries
children
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 have very strict
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 of
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, in others they can do almost everything. So where is the right type of approach?
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one
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 hand it is very important to give
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 freedom. It will help them to grow with no
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 in their mind.
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, strict
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 don’t help in
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 education process.
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 afraid to make a mistake and just follow
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 without any creativity. Because of that many modern schools create an atmosphere of freedom, where
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 can do almost everything. From
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 were created because of experience. Despite the new approaches in parenting,
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 were checked
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 time. Many generations have been
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 in very strict conditions and, nothing bad happened. Right now,
children
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 have too much attention to their persons.
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, they become very spoiled.
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 personally more for
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. I suppose that parenting is not only about developing creativity in
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, but more about preparing them
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the
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adult life. And when we talk about adults, we talk about responsibility,
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 is very important. To sum up, it is no one right approach for nurturing. Everybody should find their way of parenting for
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 better young
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 future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • upbringing
  • discipline
  • autonomy
  • safety
  • responsibility
  • creativity
  • critical thinking
  • independence
  • boundaries
  • rebellion
  • holistic development
  • structure
  • nurturing environment
  • behavioral expectations
  • social norms
  • authority
  • decision-making skills
  • consequences
  • respect
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