Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet, this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests?
However
deforestation
is a grave environmental problem, mankind continues to destroy forests
. Deforestation
has some benefits for humans ,including road construction, using the wood of trees
and the development of farmlands.
I believe that the main reason for cutting down trees
is changing forests
into agricultural land. These days, the population of the Earth has been increasing. Therefore
, the demand for food crops is growing up
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For example
, India and China are overpopulated countries that have cleared more forests
in order to have more farmland , accordingly
, enough food crops are produced. The other reason for deforestation
is the production of paper ,cardboard ,and some wooden luxury furniture which requires timbers. On a daily basis, people around the world use millions of paper for various purposes. Also
, big companies and factories have been buying timbers to build wooden items like beds, desks and like
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the like
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this
.
In addition
, the wood industry and farmland lead to many job opportunities. For instance
,numerous local people work as factory workers or farmers. In other words
, local inhabitants do not have to migrate to big cities to find a job. Secondly
, some rural areas are located in mountainous areas covered by trees
and green vegetation ,and inhabitants could not
commute easily. Wrong verb form
cannot
Therefore
, governments had to cut down trees
to construct safe and appropriate roads between villages.
To sum up
, deforestation
is a serious problem and countries do not pay attention to finding a solution in order to reduce the rate of cutting trees
because they take advantage of clearing forests
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