Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet, this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests?

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deforestation

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is a grave environmental problem, mankind continues to destroy

forests

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Deforestation

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has some benefits for humans ,including road construction, using the wood of

trees

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and the development of farmlands. I believe that the main reason for cutting down

trees

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is changing

forests

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into agricultural land. These days, the population of the Earth has been increasing.

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, the demand for food crops is growing

up

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, India and China are overpopulated countries that have cleared more

forests

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in order to have more farmland ,

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, enough food crops are produced. The other reason for

deforestation

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is the production of paper ,cardboard ,and some wooden luxury furniture which requires timbers. On a daily basis, people around the world use millions of paper for various purposes.

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, big companies and factories have been buying timbers to build wooden items like beds, desks and

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, the wood industry and farmland lead to many job opportunities.

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,numerous local people work as factory workers or farmers.

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, local inhabitants do not have to migrate to big cities to find a job.

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, some rural areas are located in mountainous areas covered by

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and green vegetation ,and inhabitants

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commute easily.

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, governments had to cut down

trees

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to construct safe and appropriate roads between villages.

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,

deforestation

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is a serious problem and countries do not pay attention to finding a solution in order to reduce the rate of cutting

trees

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because they take advantage of clearing

forests

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