Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe their judgements are generally correct. Other people don't judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impressions are wrong. Get ready to to talk to an examiner about this issue.

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Some folks trust their primary feelings about an individual's personality because they argue these
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are totally accurate. Other populace
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not judge
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's character rapidly because they believe
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emotions are incorrect. In the following paragraphs, I shall explain
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issue. On the one hand, acquiring experience in the span of life make individuals able to learn about some obvious traits that are guessable.
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to say, encounters other
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and socialising with them make
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able to guess some primary information about other
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by a glance at them.
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,
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who has a paranoid character usually avoids making
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with strangers.
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,
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accept their
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first
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judgements
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about
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because they had experienced their
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several times before that.
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, they had done these trials and errors many times,
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made a collection of information about individuals' personalities which is unconscious. So, their
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feelings can be trustable themselves.
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, there is no doubt that a person's personality is really complex and it makes
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judgements
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about them unreliable. In short,
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can control their behaviour and hide their negative aspects. It occurs because some behaviours can be unacceptable and against social customs or rules. These negative behaviours lead to punishment.
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,
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learn to avoid punishment by hiding their unacceptable traits.
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, some of our behaviours not only are not controllable
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but
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, are not conscious. If
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know about the power of unconscious aspects of
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, they will not trust their glances
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. Because everyone has unknown traits that even can make them surprised. So,
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impressions are an unreliable way to judge others. In conclusion, judging
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's character is reliable as same as it is unreliable.
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