he diagrams show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of people
who are suffering from four types of noise
in
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during
day
and at night
in the countryside.
It is clear that
the number
of citizens who hear four types of sound in
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during
day
is by far more that at night
. Also
, the
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apply
traffic
noise
affects the most number
of people
in
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during
day
and at Add an article
a day
the day
night
. Also
, There is not any industry sound pollution in rural areas.
The number
of people
who are impacted by the noise
of day
traffic
is 34 million
which is most
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the most
While
, the figures for trains and aircrafts
are significantly fewer ,with 8 and 2 Correct your spelling
aircraft
million
respectively.
The number
of people
who hear the noise
of traffic
at night
is, at
24 Change preposition
apply
million
which is the most one
in comparison with the train and aircraft which accounted for 6 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
and 1 million
respectively.
The diffrence
in the Correct your spelling
difference
number
of people
who suffer from noise
of Add an article
the noise
traffic
in
the Change preposition
during
day
and at night
is by
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apply
million
. However
, this
difference is marginal for the the
train system by 2 Remove the redundancy
apply
million
. The number
of people
who hear the aircraft noise
are
approximately equal during the Change the verb form
is
day
and might
.Correct your spelling
night
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