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The information about buying coffee and tea and drinking habit of people in five various Australian cities.

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The chart illustrates
a survey results
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survey results
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 for citizens of five Australian cities who were buying and drinking
coffee
 and tea. The five cities were Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, it is clear from the data that the cities’ people used to consume
coffee
 or tea inside
cafes
 more than buying fresh or
instant
coffee
for
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at
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 home.
However
, Adelaide figures show that residents who drink in
cafes
 and the
one’s
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ones
one
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 who bought
instant
coffee
 are almost identical. Focusing on
cafes
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cafe
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 numbers, most
of
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apply
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Hobart and Melbourne people used to drink
coffee
 and tea inside
cafes
, as its figures were almost identical around 63% of citizens. While
the
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the cafe's visitors
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cafes
 visitors for the others cities recorded 61%, 56%,
49
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% for each
of
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Sydney, Brisbane, and Adelaide.
On the other hand
,
coffee
 buyers who prefer to make it
in
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at
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home
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the home
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 used to pick
instant
coffee
 more than fresh
coffee
, where Hobart figure was the highest for
instant
coffee
, and
Sydeny
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Sydney
 was the lowest. Brisbane shows that its people pick it as low
of
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 35% and Sydney was high at 43%.
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