Write about the following topic. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 word
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school
for education or providing an
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own
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their own
home
for learning is a controversial topic among individuals,however
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some positive points in their opinion,but ,I opine the education must do in a classroom with other Change the verb form
assumes
students
that is
each kid will be becoming a useful person in a Change the verb form
are
society
.So,I am going to providing
some reasons in Wrong verb form
provide
this
area which I have Correct your spelling
experienced
exprienced
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experienced
across
my life.
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throughout
First
,keeping kids at home
to teaching
the knowledge to them has many advantages Wrong verb form
teach
such
as parents have
more control Wrong verb form
having
on
their performance Change preposition
over
to
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in
doing
their tasks.Change the form of the verb
do
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,primary students
are fond of fool
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in a
a classrooms
to prove own as Correct the article-noun agreement
a classroom
classrooms
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an
person
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people
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apply
misbehaviors
may not be diagnosedChange the spelling
misbehaviours
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at
a
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the
time
by teachers in a class, because of
, there are many Change preposition
apply
students
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at
same
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the same
time
to have watching
, so, stay at Change the verb form
to watch
home
may be a better choice to control them .
Secondly
,the most important aspect of participating in a school
for learning has a more dicipline
for children, because they Correct your spelling
discipline
disciplined
ust
wake up in a Correct your spelling
just
must
certaint
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certain
time
to go to the school
and handling some tasks in a tight time
span such
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apply
a
suitable clothes ,so,they can learn how must behave better to solving some tasks in Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
a
same Change the article
the
time
.
There are many expenses to send Add an article
a student
student
for engaging in a Fix the agreement mistake
students
school
,such
as transportation expenditure ,providing different clothes in each seasons
and pay more to teachers and agents on Change to a singular noun
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the
school
to keep our kids are secure , however
, public transportation, staying in a place that specified for a
studying have many Remove the article
apply
benefial
for Correct your spelling
beneficial
students
to behave in good proper in a
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apply
society
.
To sum up , the Correct your spelling
comparison
comparision
between sending children to gain knowledge in a Correct your spelling
comparison
school
or at home
leads us that the greater positive factors as been described by the schools because this
place is good for teaching decipline
, familiar with some laws in a Correct your spelling
discipline
society
such
as transportation laws and behaving as a part of our society
. I would stress in my opinion that we must send our kids to participte
in a Correct your spelling
participate
school
to more experter
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more expert
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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