Write about the following topic. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 word

Whether sending children to

school

for education or providing

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own

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home

for learning is a controversial topic among individuals,

however

,each side

assume

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some positive points in their opinion,but ,I opine the education must do in a classroom with other

students

that

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each kid will be becoming a useful person in a

society

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some reasons in

this

area which I have

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experienced

exprienced

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experienced

across

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throughout

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my life.

First

,keeping kids at

home

to

teaching

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the knowledge to them has many advantages

such

as parents

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more control

on

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over

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their performance

to

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doing

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their tasks.

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,primary

students

are fond of

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around

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a classrooms

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a classroom

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to prove own as

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intelligent

person

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in some way

while

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these

misbehaviors

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may not be diagnosed

in

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a

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right

time

by teachers in a class, because

of

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, there are many

students

in

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same

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time

to have

watching

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, so, stay at

home

may be a better choice to control them .

Secondly

,the most important aspect of participating in a

school

for learning has a more

dicipline

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discipline

disciplined

for children, because they

ust

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just

must

wake up in a

certaint

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certain

time

to go to the

school

and handling some tasks in a tight

time

span

such

as brushing their tooths ,eating

a

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breakfast ,wearing

a

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suitable clothes ,so,they can learn how must behave better to solving some tasks in

a

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same

time

. There are many expenses to send

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a student

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student

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students

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for engaging in a

school

,

such

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seasons

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and pay more to teachers and agents on

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school

to keep our kids are secure ,

however

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a

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studying have many

benefial

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beneficial

for

students

to behave in good proper in

a

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society

. To sum up , the

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comparison

comparision

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comparison

between sending children to gain knowledge in a

school

or at

home

leads us that the greater positive factors as been described by the schools because

this

place is good for teaching

decipline

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discipline

, familiar with some laws in a

society

such

as transportation laws and behaving as a part of our

society

. I would stress in my opinion that we must send our kids to

participte

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participate

in a

school

to

more experter

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in future life.