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Nowadays, lots of household waste is a problem. What is the cause of this problem and how can we solve the issue?

#lots #household #waste
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In recent times, plenty of domestic
waste
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becomes
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has become
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 an issue.
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 situation occurs
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 unnecessary packaging of
items
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, replacing things just
for following
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 trends, and empty containers after finishing products.
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such
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 a situation,
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 essay will discuss some measures. The large quantity of household
waste
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 is a matter of concern today. One of the first causes of
such
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 a problem is the different types of household
waste
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 produced by people.
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, ordering food from outside with extra packaging promotes the culture of disposable dishes. The next source of
wastage
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waste
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 from the house is replacing or discarding
items
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for example
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 mobile phones, clothes or footwear
for
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 following the recent social trend without proper
use
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.
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 empty containers
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 become part of the
waste
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 after finishing the products
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 as water, milk, jam or juice.
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, if the burgeoning ratio of discarded
items
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 goes out of control, the situation will turn worse. To overcome the issue of the rising amount of household trash, possible measures can be executed. One immediate practical solution would be the replacement of disposable dishes with utensils normally used at home.
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 means one can
use
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 their personal reusable utensils to bring food from delivery men. The next possible solution to
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 problem can be the long-term
use
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 of
items
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 like clothes, footwear and electronic or technological devices until
it
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they
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breaks
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 or cannot be used.
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, there are used but empty plastic, glass or metal products which must
recycle
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, reused or repaired. In conclusion, the problem of a vast quantity of home-based disposal can be resolved by exchanging disposable dishes for reusable utensils, long-term
use
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 of
items
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 and the method of recycling, reusing and repairing.
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coherence cohesion
You could enhance coherence by using more varied transitional phrases and connecting words. This will help your essay flow more smoothly.
task achievement
Try to add more specific examples to make your arguments stronger. For example, mention statistics or specific instances where waste reduction has been successful.
introduction conclusion present
Your introduction clearly outlines the main points you are going to cover, which sets a strong foundation for the essay.
supported main points
The main points in your essay are well-supported by relevant examples, making your arguments convincing.
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