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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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Some people believe that
students
 should be selected by
schools
 based on their academic abilities.
However
, others think that it is not beneficial to
students
. In my view, both types of school have some advantages and disadvantages. There are some specific
schools
 which give an exam to
students
 in order to select only
students
 with the better academic performance because these
schools
 believe that talented
students
 should be tough in a higher level of education.
For example
, most
such
schools
 provide a broader curriculum and
students
 should pass solid exams which most ordinary
students
 cannot be successful in.
Therefore
,
students
 are usually under heavy academic pressure, and most of them have to study hard. It is a good choice for
students
 who have extraordinary skills or a high IQ level because teachers do not have to waste the time in the class for explaining more to ordinary
students
 or slow learners.
Nevertheless
, studying in normal
schools
 has some benefits for
students
.
students
 will communicate with classmates who have different abilities. They will learn that people have different abilities and they should help together.
Thus
,
students
 learn to be cooperative and they will be prepared for their future life in a real society . They do not have to stand a lot of
stresses
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strains
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 because they are taught according to the standard curriculum.
In addition
, in some countries parents are interested in enrolling their children in
schools
 which are for gifted
students
.
Thus
, they enforce their children to spend their summer holiday studying in order to pass entrance exams of these specific
schools
.
Thus
, it is more useful to run only normal
schools
 and all
students
 are educated in the same and standard way. To sum up, both normal and specific
schools
 have some benefits and drawbacks . I think that all
students
 should go to normal
schools
.
Schools
 are responsible for providing extra classes for talented
students
 .
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