It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is hard to say that being a responsible adult is not easy,

therefore

the

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children

through the activity the helps their

children

to be

resposible

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responsible

.

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elementary

children

to be more responsible and

patient

in the future.

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with, the older you are, the more responsible you will get. the

parent

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should

shoud

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should

teach their

children

to be responsible and

patient

since

them

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a

child

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.

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, growing vegetables can teach the

children

to be

patient

because they have to feed the water to the plants

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, or let them have a pet to take care of.

However

, there are many activities that the

children

could do to be

patient

,

such

as learning a musical instrument, due to the fact that to be

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success

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in a piece of instrument, they have to keep repeating the same song over and over to

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.

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,

a

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children

in

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that age will get bored easily,

it

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is

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responsible

for

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the

parent

to keep their child on track.

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, find a new activity that

are relate

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to responsibility. It could be helping them

doing

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homework from school.

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is

a

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responsibility

for

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their

children

, but the

parent

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to ask them "Do you have

a

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homework?" to remind them that they have to do their homework. In conclusion, I believe that growing

a

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vegetables,

keep

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animals, or

other

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activities will help the

children

to be more

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responsible

resposible

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responsible

and be more

patient

.

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, the

parent

have

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to be a role

model

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for their

children

and help their

children

to be a responsible

adult

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adults

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in the future