Some people think that schools should concentrate on academic courses which are useful to the career of students; courses like music and sports are not useful and therefore should not be offered. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some
people
that academic Use synonyms
subjects
should be focused on in school, and they think that extracurricular classes are not vital. I totally disagree with the statement because Use synonyms
sports
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music
help in the development of overall required Use synonyms
skills
, and it Use synonyms
also
helps to make their career.
Non-academic Linking Words
subjects
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such
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music
and physical activities put ample Use synonyms
skills
in Use synonyms
children
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such
as physical Linking Words
skills
, creative Use synonyms
skills
and social Use synonyms
skills
that are essential for the overall development of the Use synonyms
children
. If Use synonyms
children
only focus on their academic Use synonyms
subjects
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such
as math, and science, it will give rise to a sedentary lifestyle so as result physical Linking Words
skills
will not be developed. Use synonyms
Moreover
, recreational activities make Linking Words
children
more creative and can more socialize with Use synonyms
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. Use synonyms
For instance
, it has been found that Linking Words
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people
and artists are more creative, healthy and have more confidence in face-to-face conversation as compared to those who just concentrate on their studies.
Another reason is that Use synonyms
sports
and Use synonyms
music
are equally important as academic Use synonyms
subjects
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is
because many Change the verb form
are
people
make their careers as artists and sportsmen and earn abundant amounts of money. Some Use synonyms
children
only want to become singers, dancers or players and do not want to become scientists, doctors or engineers so if schools Use synonyms
also
give importance to non-academic Linking Words
subjects
, Use synonyms
children
will have more career opportunities. Use synonyms
For example
, in an interview with times India, Harbhajan Singh, who is a famous Indian cricketer, told that he got many good opportunities to become a cricketer in school so now he is a millionaire.
In conclusion, I disagree entirely that Linking Words
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and Use synonyms
sports
should be equally important as academic Use synonyms
subjects
because artistic and physical education encourage their overall development and it Use synonyms
also
helps to build their career.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite