Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it legal requirement. To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycled more of their waste?
The
waste
is really harm
Replace the word
harmful
for
human life. There are many disadvantages that able influenced the environment due to the spread of Change preposition
to
waste
. Several of general
public assume that it is not enough if the Add an article
the general
waste
recycled
from homes. While other Add a missing verb
is recycled
people
argue that the most useful way to increase recycling is governments
should make rules. Personally, it seems to me that Change preposition
for governments
the
good environment is not only from homes recycled but Correct article usage
a
also
from good regulations.
It is true that people
should pay attention for
their surroundings because it can make their activities are Change preposition
to
easily
to do. The ministry Replace the word
easy
also
should make regulations in term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
recycled
the Wrong verb form
recycling
waste
, and encourage folk to clean and maintain their neighbourhood. To show the evidence for this
case, there are many people
that always doing the harmful things because throw away the rubbish in the wrong place, and it can be damaged other
Add the comma(s)
,other
people
. In addition
, if the ministry make
a legal requirement, the Change the verb form
makes
people
would follow the rules because most of them feel afraid with
the Change preposition
of
Correct your spelling
strict
strick
laws. Correct your spelling
strict
Therefore
, to make convenient
Correct pronoun usage
it convenient
area
the general public should obey the laws Fix the agreement mistake
areas
from
governments and Change preposition
of
recycled
the Wrong verb form
recycle
waste
proper
Change the adjective
properly
with
the right ways.
Change preposition
in
However
, there are several community
that still do not know Change to a plural noun
communities
about
how to recycle the rubbish because they Change preposition
apply
are
lack Unnecessary verb
apply
of
creativity. So that, public and government should make co-operation to give subject for Change preposition
apply
people
in order
they are know how to Add an article
the order
recycled
the Change the form of the verb
recycle
waste
from home. For instance
, after people
using
the products they can Wrong verb form
use
changed
those to the items that have more advantages and Change the verb form
change
able
to use Add a missing verb
are able
from
other Change preposition
by
people
.
In conclusion, the best thing to change products and make those acceptable are
recycled. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
General
public Correct article usage
The general
agree
that recycling the Change the verb form
agrees
waste
should get helping
from Replace the word
help
government
in order to give knowledge for Add an article
the government
people
to maintain the surroundings from the harm
Replace the word
harmful
waste
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